I bring traditional editorial expertise, (including copywriting, copyediting, and proofreading)to editing AI-generated copy so that it lives and breathes, makes sense contextually, and is copyedited properly.

AI

content editing

Example #1

Apple MacBook air

ChatGPT Prompt: Can you write me a headline, a subhead, and two sentences of support copy for the new MacBook Air 15-inch using the classic Apple voice?”

ChatGPT Headline: "MacBook Air 15-Inch: Power Meets Portability"

[“Power Meets Portability” could be any laptop]

[In this case I simplified by just stating product’s name and differentiating that it’s the latest model]

My Edited Headline: New MacBook Air 15-inch

Chat GPT Subheading: "A larger, brighter display in the lightest MacBook ever."

[I liked the word choice but condensed it]

My Edited Subheading:Larger, brighter, lighter

ChatGPT Support Copy: "Experience a stunning 15-inch Liquid Retina display in a sleek, all-day battery design. With the M3 chip inside, every task—creative, productive, or immersive—flows effortlessly."

[“Stunning display in an all-day battery design” is confusing.

“Stunning” is overused by AI]

[“With the M3 chip inside” Apple doesn’t say chip, and it’s implied that it’s inside.]

It’s an M5, not M3, which was two iterations ago]

My Edited Support Copy: Experience a billion colors in the 15-inch Liquid Retina display and leave your charger at home for up to 18 hours. With the powerful M5, every task—-creative, productive, or immersive—-flows effortlessly.

Example #2

rosemary’s baby novel

Prompt: “Can you write me a headline, subheading, and two sentences of support copy about the book Rosemary’s Baby and tailor the copy to women aged 25 to 55 who have a lot of disposable income?”

ChatGPT Headline: A Timeless Classic of SuspeMy Edited Headline: A Timeless Classic of Horror and Psychological Suspense

ChatGPT Subheading: In "Rosemary's Baby" by Ira Levin, a young woman’s dream of a perfect life unravels into a nightmare of unspeakable fear.

[Condensed a bit

Unraveled is used way too much by AI]

My Edited Subheading: In Ira Levin’s Rosemary's Baby, a naive young woman’s dream of a perfect life turns into a nightmare of unspeakable horror.

Support Copy: Immerse yourself in this chilling story of trust and betrayal, where every page draws you deeper into paranoia. For the woman who craves both luxury and the thrill of the unknown, this is a must-read.

[AI uses “Immerse” too much, the last sentence is odd, but it said “craves luxury” because my prompt had “a lot of disposable income” in it.

My Edited Support Copy: Set in 1967 New York, this slow-burn chiller about dark forces in a classic apartment building will draw you deeper into paranoia with every page.